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Without further ado, here is what they came up with for your entertainment...
Blackjack
I know him only as Blackjack. The
press adopted this nickname because he kills women on their twenty
first birthday. Mine's tomorrow. A week ago I received a birthday
card.
To Seren. Thinking of you. Blackjack x
Inside was an ace
of spades playing card. As cards go, it wasn't the creepiest I've
ever had - that accolade belongs to one my ex gave me. 'To my
girlfriend. You is well hot'. I'd tolerated his smelly feet, love of
football and his insistence of dyeing himself to the colour of an
Oopma-Loompa for the summer, but that card was the last straw. He's
lucky he didn't join it shredded in a bin bag.
I should've phoned the police, but
they'd have just put a squad car outside my house. They did that for his
last victim - I was in that car, watching the street while he gave
her the key to death's door.
If Blackjack wants my life, he'll have
to fight me for it.
***
I wake, surprised I haven't been
butchered; my organs dangling from some "21st!" balloons, my fingers used as
substitute birthday candles. That would really spoil my cake. It's
sunny outside - not the weather you'd associate with a serial
killer's imminent arrival like the worst birthday entertainer ever.
At least he's not a clown.
I dress and head downstairs,
strangling my braid with a band topped by a black bow and a skull.
A card sits on the hall floor, looking as innocent as a politician
caught in a brothel raid.
I open the envelope. The card has an
adorable puppy on it wearing a party hat.
To my favourite girl.
Have a great day. It will be your last. Blackjack x
Paper falls out and I pick it up. It's a
page from a diary - today's date. Seren's 21st birthday is
scrawled on it with a balloon. I suppose I should be grateful he
remembered. My ex rarely did. I turn the page over. A week after my
birthday he's written Seren's funeral. My gratitude vanishes
faster than a snowman in a heat wave. I'll boycott my funeral. I
don't have anything to wear.
Every time the door knocks, my heart
dies. It's hard enjoying presents when you're convinced each gift
will contain methods of execution. It's almost anti-climactic to
receive gift vouchers.
Night falls as swiftly and silently as
a guillotine blade. The phone rings. I answer it to hear a musical
card playing 'Happy Birthday'. I slam the phone down. Those cards are
always out of tune.
The door knocks three times. I pull
the knife from my waistband and creep forwards. Death knocks three
times. I look through the spy hole, my heart racing.
An eye stares back.
I leap backwards, swearing. I know he
can't see me, but it feels like he stared straight at me. I risk
another look.
He's gone.
I hurry to the kitchen window and
switch on the lights outside. Shadows emerge to dance in the
spotlight of the garden stage. He's not there. I lean over the sink
to check the blind spot. He appears at the window, hands pressed
against it as he peers in. I drop to the floor, squeezing myself as
close to the cupboard as possible without climbing in and hiding
amongst the fabric conditioner. By switching on the lights, I've told
him I'm home.
I crawl out of the kitchen, my heart
pounding out my own funeral track as I huddle against the wall. His
footsteps clump as he searches for an entrance. My shaking hands grip
the knife and my pepper spray. I've seen what he did to those other
girls. I won't let him do that to me. I will not be one of his
victims, my name known only for the brutal way I was murdered. That
will not be my legacy.
The front door clicks. I scream in
silence, my mind voicing what my mouth can't. I curse leaving the
spare key behind the drainpipe. I try calming the tempest in my
brain. His shadow slinks along the wall then he appears. And smiles.
"Happy birthday Seren. You're
going to get the best present - to stay twenty one forever."
I squirt my pepper spray into his
eyes. He yells and rubs them.
"You'll suffer for that." He
lifts the hand holding a parcel. "I got you a present."
"I hope you kept the receipt."
It's the same present he bought the
other girls - a traditional 21 key that was stamped so hard onto
their backs it had to be prised off, the wound unhealed as they died.
That was before the twenty one different wounds he inflicted on them.
"The only key I want is the one
to your funeral home."
I thrust the knife into his chest and
twist it. He gasps and glances down, stunned by the sight of his own
blood. He grabs me, flinging me against the wall. I bang my head,
blue lights dancing in my vision. He unwraps the present as I crawl
towards the kitchen. He grabs my leg. I kick, struggling and
screaming. He drags me towards him so I press my toes against his
stab wound until he lets go. I scramble up and run for the downstairs
toilet. I wrench the cistern lid off and rescue the sharpened 21 key
hidden inside. The only thing this will open is his jugular.
He stands in the kitchen holding his
key and a bag.
"It's very ungrateful to refuse a
present."
"I'm giving myself a present."
I raise the key. "My life."
I swing the key at him, anticipating
his duck. I stab it into his neck. I wrench it free as blood spurts
over my kitchen. He clutches the wound, gurgling as he drops to his
knees. Once he's on the floor, I hack his shirt off, grab my knife
and carve my parting gift into his back.
21 or BUST.
Were you nibbling your nails or chewing your lip while reading that?!! Cause that's what I find myself doing all the TIME when I read works by these lovely ladies! If you want more CL Raven (and I kind of can't help myself, honestly...I'm not usually a fan of horror, but there is something more than a little addicting about their work...) check out "Gunning Down Romance" (a collection of short stories about love gone terribly, horribly wrong) "Disenchanted", (a collection of fairy tales retold in the cleverest ways possible) and their full length novel, "Soul Asylum." (Mystery and Death live side by side in an ancient mental asylum! Who will survive? Who won't?)
In addition to their written works, the duo is two thirds of the hilarious web series Calamityville Horror. The girls and their handsome and goofy sidekick Ryan wend their way through historical and haunted properties located in Wales. Check them out over here!
For all updates on works in progress, Gimpic Game Adventures, Animal Army foibles, and other awesomeness, please check out CL Raven's Blog
Big thanks, cwtches, and high-fives to Cat and Lynx Raven for being on my blog today!
Thank you so much for inviting us onto your blog. We had a lot of fun writing the story, even if we had no idea what to write until we sat down with the blank document in front of us. Writing such a short story was an added challenge - we usually struggle at this length, so it was good to try something new. You'll have to come on our blog now, perhaps with a three word challenge of your own :)
ReplyDeleteI could do that!
DeleteIt was a great story! It had me sitting on the edge of my sofa! I am not a fan of horror either, but I cannot stop reading whatever thing this awesome duo come up with :D Well done!
ReplyDeletethank you :) It's nice to hear that people who don't like horror, like our work. It's somehow more of a compliment, if that makes sense.
DeleteNice! I love stalker-type killers in stories :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :) we like stalker-type killers too. In stories, not in real life. In real life it would be creepy :D
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